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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oh wow, this was such a suspenseful, information filled chapter! I was hooked the whole way through-I just couldn't tear my eyes away!

Aw, I love Nyx! He's absolutely adorable and I would totally love to have an owl like that which craved so much attention! And it would be very handy, having a wand to clean up for you, wouldn't it? I like the way you began this chapter, with Brienne waiting for Stanley to arrive and trying to occupy herself with other things, because I know exactly how she feels, just waiting around for something to happen. It always seems like the minutes stretch into hours and I think you wrote this feeling very well. And I really liked the line: 'the atmosphere would not be helped if the dining table was splattered with salamander blood.' Nice touch!

I'm not sure I've said this before, but I love the way you describe your characters. Not just their personalities, which you generally do over time anyway, but their appearance. A lot of authors (myself included) often forget to describe what their characters look like, but you do it in such a way that feels very natural, and adds to the chapter in a positive light.

I loved the line: 'After she had piled her plate high (forgetting that she had had difficulty pulling on her trousers that morning)' because it completely reminded me of how I always feel after Christmas and I also liked the way Sirius Black was mentioned in this chapter-after all, he was an important part of the third book, and I can't help but wonder if he's somehow linked with Brienne's mother? I don't know how, but it's possible? Oh, and I'm now curious about Stanley's son, and am wondering if he will show up at all?

I really enjoyed reading everything Stanley told us about the investigation of Brienne's mothers death. It was all very mysterious and I'm more curious than ever now! It's especially intriguing that her killer appears to be someone she knew, and that she was prepared for the attack and was trying to hide Brienne's existence. I can't wait to learn more information about all of it, and I'm wondering if this boy has any significance-and if the killer is someone we already know? Hmmm. I obviously have a lot of questions, which is great!

Oh my goodness that ending! What a cliffhanger! I love the pace at which you wrote it-my heart was seriously beating the whole time, and when I found out one of Brienne's photographs had been taking...wow. You honestly have an amazing writing style, and you just took things up another notch! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! I hope it wasn't an information dump! Cause it's all very important.

I didn't want Brienne to be the stick thin girl who always stays stick thin nomatter what she eats xD She's healthily curvy, much more so after Christmas!

I'll say now that Sirius has nothing to do with my story :) A few readers have wondered that and this story is completely seperate :) I'm glad you have so many questions! I hope some of them will be answered before long!

Thank you so much again for all of your kind words, thank you so much for the review!


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