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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Meh... I want more. Hello there Gabbie, I'm so sorry about my lengthy absence but exams and family and stuff kept getting in the way, so please forgive me.

This is story is just incredible. It really is. I just don't know how you do it. It's so intense that when I get to the end of a chapter I just have to sit back for a moment and readjust to reality. You are a truly incredible writer.

So, on to the chapter... I was so pleased you started exactly where you left off the last one. Made me a little flustered to be perfectly honest ;) I can't believe he pulled away though! I was so surprised and even a lit cross at first but it was definitely the right thing to do.

They really do seem to be actually getting to know each other a bit more and I am so excited to see where you take this. It is really incredible. Percy is so fascinating and I think I might be developing a similar sort of obsession with him as Audrey has.

I love how is favourite colour is purple, I have always thought that as well, I don't know why, it just suits him. And in the Wizarding world is comes across as a much more manly colour. His cluelessness about technology is adorable and when he started talking about movie stars, I actually laughed. Bless him. You really capture the confusion a wizard must feel in the muggle world, especially with things that we take for granted.

Anyway, I cannot wait for more from these two and I hope they enjoy their pizza. Iíll be off to another of your stories now but well done on another magnificent chapter,

With Love,
GirlOnTheSidelines x

Author's Response: HELLO!

*Blushes at your compliments* Yay, I'm so happy that you're back. I've missed you and your reviews but I totally understand about things getting in the way and taking up your time. I'll be busy myself in a few months so I might not be able to come online for a long while but until then, here I'll be and there'll always be more stories for you.
So. I am so sorry that I had to cut off Percy and Audrey's moment for you but goodness, did I blush while writing that! I had to really sit back and try to think clearly because my mind was a complete mess. This story is actually one of my harder ones to write and I have to, like you said, re-evaluate everything I wrote. Its intense stuff sometimes. :D
I think I had to have Percy stopping though with what he and Audrey were about to do, he sort of just had to think about what he wanted from her and get to the point of what he needed their relationship to be. Him demanding that out of Audrey was actually a good thing and it puts them in a completely different position. *No pun here, mind you*
Percy is becoming an obsession for me, I absolutely adore him right now. Audrey will be getting more than a few surprises from him if I have my say and I'm working on more chapters as soon and fast as I can! D':
You know, I thought that purple was a rather soft color for Percy, maybe hinting at how sensitive he can be. But it is pretty funny to Audrey, who's completely opposite of him and sort of goes for more bold things. ;)
That little bit about movie stars was too funny and writing about his fascination with technology is really fun for me. And Audrey as well, she's just the greatest and putting an air of confusion for a wizard in the muggle world is too tempting. :D
I will try to be getting more up for these two soon and they will enjoy their pizza. And each other. ;)
I missed you and I hope you enjoy all the updates that I've gotten. Phew!
Much love of course,

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