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Review:CharliesRose says:
Heya, I'm Char. So your story caught my eye and looked amazing, which the first chapter was. You write beautifully, and I'm not exaggerating, it all flowed so well, I think thats really important in a story, there was nothing disjointed about this, it was great.
Just a tip would be, be careful of clumsy typos like forgetting words or writing words twice (you wrote a part "knocking on the door on the door" just be careful of things like that.
Otherwise well done, your characters are already developing brilliantly and its really well written.
Well done and Happy Writing.
~Char

Author's Response: Hi Char,

Thank you, that really means a lot. I get worried that i write like i think in my head, which is completely disjointed but i'm glad it's not coming across like that!

Ah, i'm awful when it comes to spotting typos, i read over it so much that i just tend to scan over it in the end and miss them all but i will definitely try and catch them all before i publish!

Again, thank you so much. I really appreciate the review and the tips. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

-Vicki.

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