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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Aww! This was so cute and fluffy! I love how the facts from Teddy's life started the story and they ended the story too. That was a really nice touch.

I love how he didn't realise immediately that he was falling in love with Victoire even thought the signs were there. Green hair, chimpanzee-like smile and awkward moments; yup, Teddy is in love.

The atmosphere between the two was just so awkward but it was cute at the same time. And I can't believe that Teddy didn't quite catch that Victoire wanted to go to Hogsmeade with him. Sheesh, Teddy. You're not so smooth after all, are you?

Anyway, I loved reading this! I can't believe this is your first try at Victoire/Teddy, it's wonderul! :D ♥


71st review out of 100

Author's Response: 71st review out of 100? Not a bad effort!

I adore fluff, so I couldn't resist! I'm glad that you liked it - especially the beginning and the end!

And Teddy's just a real cutie. I couldn't resist making this as awkwardly cute as possible!

And thank you again! Good luck with the rest of your 29 reviews!

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