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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Its Gabbie here with your requested review! *Hands over cake and sweets* Its nice to be back reading this, I had wondered what would happen after the last chapter I'd read. So there's so much going on here that I just don't know where to start first and I think I'll just go on about Geoffery for a while. There's some slynesst o him that I like, as he isn't sure what Harry and Sirius are going to go do with him, he's playing his cards while also keeping some hidden. The fact that he knows more about Devlin than Harry could at this moment just puts him in a position to give out as much information as he'd like. But the information he gives has me wondering just how far he'll be willing to defy Voldemort. :D Naughty of him!
Harry is the one I'm worried about though. He's sort of allowing his hope to get the best of him but he should be careful, from what he saw towards the end, his son is no longer HIS son, you know? Scary stuff and I feel sorry for him and Alex. D':
Such a curious world you've set up and I really enjoy it! Werewolves and Devlin turning into a little monster, its such a contrast to what I expected and the fact that Voldemort knows so much more about Harry and the rest makes me cringe. Its not over yet! :D
I think, as for CC's, there were a few grammar things but aside from that it was gold. :D Your pacing was great and your characters are very unique and like I said, I love this world you've made.
Thanks for the read!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Oi! I thought I had written a reply to you here but I guess I hit the all important 'submit' button. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - it's been great to have a continuous reviewer to get a good idea of how it's progressing.
Geoffrey is shaping up to be one of my favorite characters to write, next to Devlin, of course! He definitely hasn't simply 'switched' - as you'll see from his behavior later on.
Harry is definitely letting hope get the better of him - and more so in the next chapter when he starts planning.
Devlin - I can't wait to introduce him in 'person' and not in memories!


Thanks again, Gabbie!


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