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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hey Gabbie!
This chapter was SO GOOD. I'm so relieved that Scorp and Lav got out of the forest alright! When Albus was waiting for Hagrud to open the door I was really nervous that he wasn't going to be there and that Al would have to go look around in the forest by himself! But thankfully Hagrid was there! And I'm really glad they found Scoroious and Lavender, even if Zabini was there, too. But that confirms their suspicions that he was out in the forest looking for wolfsbane!
You wrote Hagrud really well! I think he would be one of the hardest characters to write in canon, because he has such a distinct personality and way of speaking compared to the other characters, and you wrote him fantastically!
I really hope that Albus, Scorp, and Lav get a good plan together! And that they see Ben soon! Heeheehee.
This chapter was brilliant! ASOS is next for me, then back to TFD and I'm thinking about writing a one-shot, too! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey, there! Its always good to see you coming back to this. :3
I think a few people were worried about Scorpy and Lav making it out of the Forest in one piece. I had actually thought of having Albus going back in there for them but thought of saving that for another time. Oh, yes, they found out Zabini was looking for Wolfsbane but things aren't nearly as simple as they look! :D
I think Hagrid is one of those characters that is really hard to get right. He took me a while to get just right and I'm glad that it was able to come out all right. :D His speech patterns are so tough to get down! D':
But yes, the Misfits had better come up with a plan soon! Halloween is only a week away and don't you worry, Benjamin shows up in another chapter or so. ;)
There's a fresh chapter of this up for you to read too! :D The queue was really short last night! :D
On my end, I'm going to get the next chapter of A Force of Blaise--Wills up for you after I finish and then, maybe Memories. After that, who knows? :D
Thanks for coming back and I read and reviewed LMT! D':
Can't wait for more stuff from you!
Much love,
Gabbie


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