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Review:Mystique says:
Hello, I'm here with your requested review.

Wow. This one-shot truly is beautiful. I think my heart broke a little as I was reading this.

I have to admit that I changed my opinion several times as to who the characters were in this story. My first thought was that it was James and Lily, my second was that it was Snape and Lily. Then I decided that it probably is an OC couple. Although I do think that the female character is quite similar to Lily.

You mentioned in your areas of concern, about the characterisation of the narrator. I honestly thought that your narrator was extremely well characterised. To me, he felt very realistic and I felt his pain, his emotions, his nostalgia all very vividly which made me sympathise with him even more.

I really don't have any CC for this one-shot. You two characters were realistically portrayed - especially the girl I think, it was almost as if I knew her. I thought that this story was perfect, there was just enough about the characters to satisfy me and to keep me wanting more. I really liked the way that you kept the names and identities of the characters hidden, it added more to the intrigue of this one-shot.

I hope I helped and feel free to re-request.
Charlie

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