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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Its me, Gabbie with your requested review! *Throws confetti* and its good to be back, I was wondering how this story was doing after those last two chapters that I read.
So, the beginning of this was flooded with good action, I love a bit of fighting a story and I think you did really well with it. I was able to sense just how frightened Victoire was by the fighting going around her and I was scared that she was going to be really hurt and lose part of her team. The organization seems pretty darn tough right now and I'm wondering just how many people are in on this. It seems like it networks all over the place and I'm getting the feeling that its only going to be more complicated as we go along.
I liked the little bits of Victoire's personal life, I really loved getting to know more about her. She's actually quiet likeable and thanks goodness because sometimes she's written in a way that makes me cringe. Not that I haven't done it myself but your Victoire is so sweet and down to earth and I really like her.
But goodness, I can't believe what Lance is asking her to do! Not only is it dangerous but she obviously doesn't want to do it! I have a feeling that things are not going to go right and I hope that she'll keep a level head and find out the information she needs. D':
As for the case itself, you've got me really curious. I'm wondering what the eventual outcome will be and just who is behind all of this and I can't wait to find out, I think you've got a good mystery going here so thanks for requesting it for me. :D
I didn't spot any CC's and I liked your pacing and flow and the breaks that you added in. :D So good job!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Yay :) Thank you for the lovely review! I was a bit concerned about the flow, so I'm glad it reads okay!

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