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Review:Ardeith says:
OMG...this was the best chapter! Full of Ron and Hermione goodness! And the return of Mimi -- who is a bloke, you know ;-).

I liked the beginning with them in the Muggle hotel. I enjoy seeing Rose-the-mom, for a change.

Here are some favorite lines:

I only assaulted him a little bit. They set me up. It wasn't my fault.I see why you and Rose got to be such fast friends, said Dad.

She's helped me out of a few tough spots. This was actually true, although it made it sound like the tough spots had been over the course of years rather than packed into about a three-day span. Semantics.

And everything to do with Ron and Hermione!

Hope Scorpius/Ramses and Mimi are safe.

Author's Response: The "you know she's a bloke, right" cracked me up to write. Rose had no idea. XD

Rose is nervous for her baby, and even under normal circumstances, when she comes home from work she does look in on him.

Mimi meeting Ron and Hermione was far too much fun to write. I was picturing Ron's face the whole time, and Hermione stuttering through speaking to Mimi. hahaha... Oh my.

I'm glad you liked the Ron/Hermione in this chapter! I love writing them. Thank you so much for reviewing!


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