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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey Its Mya here =)

I really liked this! I loved how you gave Narcissia an actual character bio. She's a strong woman and does things that are not evil. It shows that she actually has a heart and kinda also brings out why she might have helped Harry in the end.

I also like how you mentioned how she loved Lucius though I didn't really understand why she did since he's so different from everything she has wanted or craved. I think maybe you could show us more about why she loves him? Even just one sentence more or like a memory. Nothing too much but just a more insight.

I love the use of imagery! It's astounding reaally! Good job with that.

I understand it's a bit vague but since it's your first chapter that's totally fine =)

Great work really! Keep it up :D

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