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Review:EarthsTrueGreen says:
It wasn't as exciting as your other chapters, it felt more like a filler chapter, but I guess all stories have to have them.I did note that Scorpius knows something about Faye. Also I hope that everything works out alright for the Lucy/Dave/Rose triangle, I'm not sure where that one is going to end up because Dave seems really nice but he also seems to really like Rose. Also Hugo is a jerk... Anyways in my last review, I did mean tension Scorpius and Dave, not Scorpius and Rose. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Hello again EarthsTrueGreen,

I'm afraid this was a bit of a filler chapter but it had to be done to get some stuff out of the way, the next chapter has a lot more things happening in it which I hope you enjoy. Scorpius does indeed know something about Faye Rivers as we will later discover.

As for the love triangle they have got themselves into, all I can say is that things will progress in the next chapter, whether you will like it or not, I could not say. Dave is a confusing character. He is one of those characters whose mind I am still moulding and it keeps morphing in ways I don't expect it to. But we will just have to see where that goes.

Hugo does come across as a bit of a jerk. But a handsome jerk. We will be seeing more of him in Chapter Eight so hopefully he might be able to redeem himself... or not.

I thought that might have been it. The next chapter is already in the queue so keep an eye out for it and I hope you find it more exciting than this one.

Thanks you very much for reading and review and I hope you like what is to come,

Irish Myth.

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