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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello Cassie :D So...I'm your ex-Secret Santa now :P Gah, I know I said I'd review this some days ago, but RL and all...and then I forgot. Sorry :( Anyway, I am SO GLAD you updated :)

I'm really enjoying your story so far! That little scene and the conversation with Godric inside his warm homely little cottage was just too sweet. And Godric declaring that he'd rather have his horses and be a stable hand than be a royal princess-in-training! Made me giggle a little. Oh, and THIS PART:

Dezzy liked his smile. His warm brown eyes crinkled, and she saw as a piece of the golden mane of his hair fell into his eyes. Slowly, she reached up and brushed it back from his face. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw that the sun was now at it's highest point in the sky.

My insides have become mush. A lovely sort of mush. Your words are just so beautiful and vivid, and for this part, there was something rather subtle to it.

I also enjoyed the second part of the chapter with Dezzy's sisters, and how eager they are. They are shipping Dezzy with Godric as much as I am :D

And the ending! Such a mysterious and unsettling ending to what has been a very lovely warm chapter with lots of good feels in it. I really love how you described Salazar's eyes - their colour and their peculiarity. I'm really curious to know what happens next, and how the thing between Dezzy and Salazar will develop.

Anyway, this has been a great chapter! I've enjoyed reading it and I think your story is just getting more and more intriguing. Can't wait to read more :) And I'm going to favourite this before I forget again.



Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad that you continued reading this story! Don't worry about not reviewing right away, it's totally fine!
I love writing Dezzy and Godric together, because they're both smart, kind people, who have genuine conversations, and really care about one another's feelings.
Well, I'm glad you're insides are a lovely sort of mush! I don't think any other kind would be so good ;) But Dezzy and Godric are starting to gradually get closer... and the Ravenclaw girls are making sure that they are informed every step of the way!
I'm really glad you picked up on all of that in the ending! I really wanted to get an uneasiness to it after all the warmth and loveliness of Dezzy's day with Godric.
I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you continue to read! Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
Cassie :)

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