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Review:Aiedail says:
I am amazed that you could take the time to write about what's going on in the stands, that you're so faithful to rachel's character that you take time to go into detail about the things that matter to her in this moment, watching the canary cream pass around, that a boy is pockmarked, that there is some hilarity at the moment things are about to go their worst; how did you do it? I have sat weeping over my keyboard at times: sometimes it's best to do this or nothing.

The point where I truly lose it in this chapter--because we've known what's been coming--is when Fred, Fred of all people, has to be the one to make it real to her, to tell her in plain language. It's so cruel, in a way, that the jokester has to sober up; but it's also extremely powerful because of that; he's really there for Rachel, right when she feels she doesn't have anyone at all.


Author's Response: The thing I think I remember most about this chapter, and am suitably excited you picked up on, was how /clear/ all the little details were. All the people and what they were doing and saying, they were just inexplicably crystalline in my mind. Does that make any sense? And I think it sort of balances out the fuzzy numb that comes at the end, where she can't make sense of anything.

I can't tell you how I do it; my brain just conjures up things and I write those things down. D: If I had a better explanation, I'd give it to you!

ISN'T THAT HORRIBLE, THAT FRED'S GOT TO BE THE ONE TO ADOPT THE MANTLE OF RESPONSIBILITY. (Worse yet, think of Fred's canon ending. Oh, why did I do this. It should have been George.)

♥ Thank you so much for loving this story so much. You are just incredible. I CANNOT SAY IT IN PROPERLY GRATEFUL WORDS.

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