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Review:Aiedail says:
this chapter just gets real. It's like the beginning of the end because the illusions and sparkles of the relationship are dissipating and people are getting hurt and scared; the way that you've maneuvered this chapter in here after several squealy-shippy chapters is really impressive to me. the more realistic ebb and flow of bliss sets in and of course we all know what it leads to; but we, too, want to sit in this moment of happiness with them all the more because of that.

GOOD OL' GEORGE I LAV YA

and of course the way you make everything make sense; the twins interacting wtih ron and hermione, the way that it's only news where they'll go to little gabrielle; it's just good writing, WHATEVER YOU'D SAY ♥

Author's Response: This chapter seems to have basically gotten across what I /wanted/ it to get across, that things are getting a bit darker even if the characters don't really notice. And I'm still just sitting here in a sort of awe not only because of how much you truly seem to love this story (which I can never thank you enough for), but because of how well you understand it.

I think this was the first time I wrote Snape into this story and is arguably part of the reason I went on to write about him more -- this would have been about the time I was reading ChaNT for the first time and that was what inspired the entirety of Sneth. SO HERE WE GO, OUR FIRST LOOK AT SEVERUS. LET'S PRETEND BETH'S SOMEWHERE LURKING IN THE BACKGROUND OF HIS LIFE.

You are the best. You are making me remember why I wrote this story; I'm falling in love with it all over again. How do you do this?! SORCERY. ♥


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