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Review:Aiedail says:
Rachel almost seems to have adopted a Hufflepuff point of view; because a Gryffindor would care about winning, wouldn't she, that'd be half of the goal, but a Hufflepuff would be really in tune with the human part of it and be glad that he'd made it out. I.E. rachel and cedric are becoming soul mates.

But this is also why it's so perfect that the twins are pushing her to side with her house and reminding her of house loyalty. It's a smart plot-point even if it makes Rachel angry.

ARGH BUT YOU DO KNOW WHAT IT IS. WOVE. TWOO WOVE.

I admire that Rachel's favorite thing to say is shut up, I just thought you should know

A HUFFLEPUFF CALLED SOMEONE STUPID ALERT THE PRESSES

AGAIN, CEDRIC, YOU DON'T WASTE TIME DO YOU. GET RIGHT TO THE MOST IMPORTANT THING. YOU ALWAYS ASK THEM OUT RIGHT AWAY. GOOD FOR YOU. I'M PROUD, SON.

I always want them to kiss here WHY DON'T THEY IT CAN JUST BE A LITTLE ONE

you tell them slytherins, Rach! go go go

ugh your author's note is enough to make me quiver even though I know what's going to happen RAAWRAR

xxx

Author's Response: I was senselessly proud of having Rachel quarrel with Fred and George over Cedric vs. Harry, and of course you point out it's a Hufflepuff sort of thing and you make absolute sense. Rachel would work much, much better as a Hufflepuff, BUT THEN WHERE WOULD MY CAREFULLY-CONSTRUCTED PLOT GO. (-sarcastic laughter abounds-)

Ugh Rachel says 'shut up' so much why. ♥ But you know, it's quite a relief how frank Cedric is in this story, because it's somehow turned a total 180-degree turn in Sneth. Nobody ever says what they're feeling in that story and it just creates a whole boatload of problems for everyone.

I don't think the writerly bit of me's got a brain, really.



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