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Review:Aiedail says:
poor Rachel, girls are after her man and she's gotta worry about him being safe. that's too much for anybody!!!

ALSO CEDRIC JUST SAY IT DEAR LORD YOU'RE DRIVING ME CRAZY WIURAIUWERIEWUR

I want to kick her too don't worry Rachel; I mean pull yourself together Sprout!!!

rachel has the perfect words ofc I envy her why can't I seduce men the way she can

SLYTHERINS Y U SUCH SLIME HUH HMMM???

also go rachel that is an A+ come-back ahweureurhue i can't

but really, poor girl, because EVEN I AM WORRIED ABOUT CED AND I AM NOT LIVING IN THEIR WORLD ALSO MAYBE I KNOW HOW THIS ENDS BUT WHATEVER THAT IS IRRELEPHANT

I love how Cedric clearly isn't the smartest person but to Rachel he is the absolute standard; he is perfect to her and therefore, thereby, rather, to me.

I like, too, the sense you give us that Rachel can't really clearly see what's going on. I always felt like that must be the case in reality, more so than they made it appear in the films. And it's the thing where you're so intently focused that nothing makes sense at all, which seems counter-intuitive but I think it must be a defence tactic.

darn straight you need to be with him you little fairy princess!!! that's why you can just walk into the champion's tent like it ain't nobody's business~

cedric is happy because adrenaline rush is often confused with sexual attraction when a pretty lady is present. that's a fact, you can look it up and stuff. i'm just saying.

FINALLY SHE HAS ADMITTED TO HERSELF THAT CEDRIC HAS FEELS FOR HER IT ONLY TOOK HER SEVEN CHAPTERS SHEESH



Author's Response: It was probably this point that I realized Rachel was worrying too much (wow, does that sound familiar?) and got frustrated and changed her entirely to worry less. CONSISTENT CHARACTERIZATION, WHAT IS THAT. I remember very much enjoying this chapter, though, when I was writing it, and I'm still quite fond of it now. All of the task chapters were delightful to write, and I think it's because those were some of my favorite parts of GoF. Which is my favorite HP book. TRIVIA TIME.

And then there's my favorite bit, which is straight out of a cheesy romance novel, but she just runs into his arms and he hugs her and help me, I am getting warm feels from my own writing. This is illegal in 37 countries.

BUT SERIOUSLY, MY CHEST IS ALL WARM AND FLUTTERY. H E L P ~


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