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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey! Its Mya here for your review!

Well you have a great start here. We can kinda see what Marcia is like and her relationship with her parents and all. Obviously shes is a Muggle born Witch.

One thing I would like to say is that, I felt there was an important spark missing from the update. It was a great start but it felt like it too cliche with family problems and Marcia's attitude and all.

I would like to see some faults or things about Marcia that sets her different and makes this story your own. Hopefully we will see more of that in more updates =)

Once again don't let me discourage you! It was a good start really

If you want more reviews you know where to find me :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing!

She's actually a half-blood(it says at the beginning) but she's not sure, because she doesn't know who her dad is.

I tried to make it as normal as possible, the only family problem is that her dad is never talked about and she knows nothing about him - but her relationship with her mum is fine - I might add more in about that so it's easier to see.

I'll try and add more faults then I guess :) She's already unpunctual, messy and unpopular with the kids at her school, although that might be quite cliched. I dunno. :P

Thanks again!

- Em :)

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