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Review:Aiedail says:
UM EXCUSE YOU CEDRIC IS TOTALLY DIFFERENT TO EVERYONE HE IS A GODDESS-BORN PERFECTION OF MAN

you've managed to capture the small-school atmosphere so well, because everyone at Hogwarts is interested in personal details of other people that don't matter to anyone else except for small-school goers. it's just an extended family in which extraordinarily gorgeous boys whom you've never seen before appear and whisk you off your feet.

THEY ARE SO AWKWARD ABOUT THIS I LOVE IT

LUU UURVE SEAT WOO OOO OO

argh this is so frustrating because in that moment NONE OF THE END COULD HAVE HAD TO HAVE HAPPENED ARGH ARGH

ooO Ooo OOO ooo I am giggling a little at her seductive drinking prowess like how do you lift beer to your mouth and watch someone's eyes at the same time those are two hard things to do; i.e. further proof she is a goddess
not that I've mentioned that before

why doesn't Ced ask her about all the clubs? jw

this is like, a legitimate fear of mine, because I do not like sports fanatically like fine I'll sit and watch or whatever but I don't get it and I only like baseball and golf and people don't like those things and all boys like basketball so HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO EVER GET MARRIED

phew

anyway I like how you handle differences and how Cedric is perfect. and now I know the answer is just to go to the library and read about it. perfect.

here's a story for you: once at the library I was handing a pretty boy his book and our fingers hooked onto each other and got stuck for a minute before we both moved in a way to get them untangled but we were holding hands for a minute and it was kind of nice

anyway I thought of it because Rachel and Ced brush fingers :3

YO, CEDRIC, IT'S YOUR HOMEBOY CALLIN, LEGGO OF THAT HOTTIE AND MAKE A CRASH-LANDING ALREADY WE GOT REAL-LIFE TO DEAL WITH YOU KNOW

I'm sorry

darn it ben you ruin everything !!!

ok I don't know about you but after a date with a perfect man I might sit and giggle or cry for a while but Rachel is perfect and therefore capable of productive behavior even on emotional days

how does she do it. tell me her secrets. xxx

Author's Response: That is one of the weird things, I think -- how Hogwarts is supposed to have 1,000 students and how /few/ people we actually see to meet that number. JKR can say what she wants, but I think Hogwarts is a small school; this is what fan fiction is for. (And still Rachel never noticed Cedric?!)

We are very much going to be cat ladies. You can teach me to knit and we'll knit little booties for all the neighborhood kittens and then have to spend a lot on rabies shots. ALSO. I might have laughed entirely too much at your small jab at Benjamin-type persons (and you know if he ever reads this I am deader than dead, so let's hope he doesn't trawl LO for mentions of him in responses. I am so paranoid now).

Secrets of being Rachel: I DON'T KNOW. IF SHE HAD ANY TO TELL, I'D WANT THEM TOO. ♥


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