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Review:Aiedail says:
That second paragraph is ME. ME ME ME. stop writing about my life, thank.

this girl. literally hours and she is in love. problems i also share. DTOP STOP

fun fact: during my stay in england I learned the word serviette for napkin.

george will you never learn that you cannot stick out your tongue with food in your mouth??? is that really a hard concept
i do not understand boys

I think it's funny that Rachel notices Slytherins hissing when in the books I think Fred and George were the most obviously disappointed or perhaps that's just the films or maybe I made it up but there you go that's just what I thought

CEDRIC IS SO SMOOTH AND DREAMY
that sounds like he is chocolate pudding sorry

stupid stupid stupid is always the pep talk I give myself after work if you know what I mean

rachel literally has it made she has /class/ with him that is the best thing ever for making friends and then becoming lovers with someone trust me
because i have no idea but i know not having class with people doesn't make it easy

i'm not trying to impress you with my logic don't worry

if I had been rachel though I would have identified with Marcus to the point that I started also stabbing kippers and possibly even dropping them under the table for added effect

but this is the story of rachel who is successful in love hAH

you are thinking this way because you are in love it's not that hard to understand

GIGGLING IS SEXAY

WHY DOESN'T SPROUT SEND THEM TO THE HOSPITAL WING I HAVE ALWAYS WONDERED THIS WHAT IS SHE SOME KIND OF CRAZY LADY

but I was telling Gina this earlier; RC told our class that the best thing for relationships is for stuff to go wrong on dates. this is practically their first date right therefore perfect relationship

GOD CEDRIC ISN'T ONE FOR SMALL TALK IS HE
GETS RIGHT TO THE IMPORTANT STUFF LIKE ASKING PEOPLE OUT

also just for fun baked potato = jacket potato xoxoxo

Author's Response: Cannot stop writing about your life when we are so similar, kthx. ♥ I DON'T EVEN WANT TO THINK ABOUT HOW MANY AMERICANISMS ARE IN THIS STORY. I CANNAE.

It makes me chuckle how quickly Cedchel happened in this story, although then again the ending probably would have been a let-down otherwise. You can see how carefully I thought about this. But I really should show you some of my other stuff sometime, because a Fred/OC short story and an incomplete Charlie/OC something-or-other are definitely still existing on my old dinosaur of a computer back home. SO MUCH SPEEDY ROMANCE. You will want to gouge out your eyeballs.

Clearly Cedric/Rachel have the perfect relationship. That is why they exist at all, ofc. ♥ THEY ARE PLEASED YOU APPROVE OF THEIR WHIRLWIND COURTSHIP.


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