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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again!

This is really interesting! I've never read one of the Scamander's being bitter, I think most people (including myself) see them as inseparable.

Again, you've captured the emotion and Lysander's thought process perfectly! It's amazing, you can write hilarious novels that are full of wacky characters (cough-Spencer-cough) but then you can write these amazing pieces, filled with emotion and imagery. (Not saying your other stuff doesn't though, it's just more prominent in your one-shots).

I loved the quote: "When Lysander flies, Lorcan soars."

It's just so powerful. A lot of siblings have that rivalry where one is better than the other and you just captured it in that one tiny sentence, in my opinion.

Also, I love how reluctant Lysander is to wear the sweater. I think he should be grateful and he shouldn't compare it to Lily's. He just doesn't seem to understand that he is his own person and Luna still loves him for it.

Anywho, this was another AMAZING one-shot, it was angsty and bitter, which is always fun to read! :D (It shouldn't be but it is :p)

Another 10/10! :D

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