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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Back again. Poor George. Poor me. Poor George! This was perhaps like, the most brilliant thing ever, I've NEVER seen this before in all of the fanfics that I've read. I thought you played on all of the emotions and turmoil of the moment so well and of course, there was George. The fact that he kept referring to himself as something like, "we, are, us" just broke me into pieces. I thought you wrote those scenes in a very lovely way, though, but I can tell how hard it was to write. Grief is a hard thing to write anyway but you just amped it up 100x what I'm used to! D':
The fact that George took a mind altering thing was something I'd never seen before. The boys were so naughty though! Ha. How he was tasting air, and grass just sort of stood out in my mind and I could picture him so well, it was so tough reading him suffering so badly.
The funeral scene was what got me. I wasn't sure how I was going to react to that but I sat there, as stiff as a board and just had to allow my heart to shatter. Poor George! And oh, God, how he's going to regret what happened after this! ARGH! I don't know what else to say, there was so much that I loved about this, I can't put it into words!! Darn. Just know that it was amazing and thanks so much!
Also, that ending is going to stick with me. Gave me the chills. :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Yeah, SUCH A DIFFICULT TO CHAPTER TO WRITE OMG.

I'm so glad it worked for you. And wow, that's some serious praise you're giving me! Brilliant? My goodness!

BAHAHA GRIMBLY LET'S HIT UP THE GRIMBLY. Dunno where that came from to be honest. But the moment the idea struck that the twins could be, you know, experimenting with stuff, I just couldn't get it out of my head. It seemed really silly, the things he did...but I wanted him to do something silly anyway. All I had to do was be convincing. And man was that difficult. But ah, so so happy you loved this chapter! I think it's probably my favourite out of the three chapters I've written so far :P Yeah, that's not really saying a lot...

I'm currently trying my best to start Chapter 4! It's even more difficult because it's back to dead Fred again.

Thanks Gabbie! Love your lovely lovesome reviews!

teh ♥


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