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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Surprised to see me popping up back here, yes? I thought it would be sooo good to get back into this story and here I am. So, I loved the way you have this written in Fred's POV, I've never read anything like it before, its such a unique way of doing it. I thought that his personality had so much more depth to it than I've been used to seeing and I really enjoyed it. The fact that he was even talking about death in the first place and avoiding the issue even while talking about it showed alot. Living in the moment and just being there is what mattered the most at that time and I loved that you made such a distinction with that. Moments of course with Fred and George being together just makes my heart tighten up but I thought you did something very nice here. It wasn't so much sad as it was brotherly and loving and I could have just read that for the rest of the day. What's sad, aside from Fred dying of course is the fact that his idea of dying was so different from how it really was. But that's what's shocking about death and he sort of said the same thing himself at some point! D':
The last little bit with Percy and that night just sort of made me sooo depressed. I hate reading about Fred dying! Which is why I've NEVER written it, btw. Hahhaa. I sort of have to read the next chapter immediately. So, expect me again. Hahahha.
Great peace of work and I have nothing to say about pacing or grammar or any of that boring stuff.
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: GABBIE ♥

Arrgh, so it's taken me like nearly a month to respond to your reviews. I'M SO SORRY :( I am a bad proctrastinator and I have no other excuse for being so tardy with my responses. And THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG for all your wonderful reviews.

And yes, the twinsies. FEEELS MORE FEELS LIKE EELS. Maybe not eels. But gah, yes, again, POOR FRED POOR GEORGE POOR TWINSIES. I was trying to convey a different sort of mood here, one that is less grief-laden than the previous chapter.

It's actually been quite a while ago since I wrote this chapter. I dunno...I feel there's something wrong with it...it seems overly descriptive in the wrong areas, and the twins' relationship to each other seem a little...stilted and forced. I'm actually thinking of cutting out a lot of stuff and rewriting this entire chapter. And moving it further down the story as well :D

Thank you for your lovely compliments! YOU;RE TOO KIND GABBIE. I'm off to answer your next lovely review!

♥ teh

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