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Review:peanuts11 says:
As a general rule of thumb, I tend to avoid stories that features characters pre-Hogwarts, or during childhood as I find them to be a challenging read.

I saw this and I was so intrigued.

The characterization of Sirius is so spot on with my idea of him. He's quite rebellious and naughty, without the teenage angst. I like the idiosyncrasies, like how Lexi has neater handwriting and can spell better.

I also really like Lexi. She seems really cute and innocent.

It also really amuses me that they bond over their mutual dislike of their siblings.

I love that you have this effortless way of writing and I can't wait for you to update this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and for reading this story!

I'm really pleased to hear that you liked my characterization of Sirius, and that you liked the mention of Lexi's handwriting and spelling - although personally I wouldn't call them idiosyncrasies, as good spelling and legible handwriting aren't that unusual. :)

I assure you that Lexi isn't cute and innocent - you'll see flashback chapters of her, and she won't always be as pleasant as she is now. ;)

I needed something for them to bond over, and siblings seemed good - my childhood best friend and I bonded over the fact that we were only children, so yeah. XD

Thank you, thank you! I'll definitely update soon!

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