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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm here with your requested review, and its Gabbie, Queen of the Underworld in case you were confused on that. But anyway, I thought that this was really unique, you went in a completely different direction from what I thought you would with this. I liked that you gave a background to the ghoul, though I was wondering how he died or something and what sort of person he was. You also gave a hint of a family too, which was funny to read and he has this over the top personality that I enjoyed seeing. He wants to be an actor? Hahaha. I loved that he kept going on about how fabulous he was and how "underappreciated" he was at the Weasley home. I thought that was a good little bit too, with him going on and on about how amazing he was compared to Ronald. The descriptions of the gang was good too, I really liked reading from his POV. He's taking his role very seriously! Hahahaha.
The only CC's, I can give is that you should add in some of those pesky periods. And I think you said "his" where you should have said "he" a few times but other than that, I really liked this!
Thanks for the read!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hey Gabbie! Thanks for the review, and yeah I'm glad that you thought it was unique and unexpected, as that's what I wanted it to be! Ha yeah, that line from Ron, stuck in my head, and I was just like, hey it's fan fiction, anything goes! And yes he certainly takes it seriously, how else will he get his Oscar! And yeah, you and someone else pointed that out to me, so I'm just off to edit it now, as writing it when you're half-awake is bound to lead to errors! Thanks again! Kiana :)

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