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Review:hpsauce says:
George's feelings of loss were well displayed in this piece; his thoughts were well presented and written. I could understand George's thought process and could easily sympathise with the character.
A few errors:
'He know he was slowly losing himself' should be 'He knew'
'For awhile he had hated his brother' should be 'For a while, he had...'
'opr the memories of anyone' 'opr' should be 'or'
Aside from that, a good piece of work there :)
Thanks for entering my challenge :) I will get the results out asap on the hall of fame feed. They will probably be up in January, but no later than mid-February.

Author's Response: Yeah I was going to go re edit the story once I got my chapter image for it. I wrote it a bit hastily and probably should've went over the spelling 1st before submitting it.

I thank you for presenting the challenge. And soon as I saw it, this story immediately popped into my head and I wrote it. I've never had inspiration that fast or strong.

I can't wait to see the results and thanks for reviewing as well =]

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