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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
Foul and loathsome, indeed... LOL! XD I absolutely loved that question of hers. Harry had a LOT of explaining to do and given his demeanor, he knew it would take much convincing on his part. Your portrayal of Harry was perfect.

I hope you elaborate on the different set of rules that Purebloods have (in future chapters). I would love to read any insight you might have or even a few examples that she can really get upset about... or at least, irritate her to the core. ;)

And the Venators... ooh, a diabolical Pureblood group sounds something right up Draco's alley. He'd fit right in and would be perfect for any kind of undercover work. Since he started right after graduation, you have me wondering if he had a choice in the matter. (?) Was he already a part of the group or have some sort of history with them? I hope you give readers the answers as you go along. You have me so curious! :)

And basing the group in Italy... awesome. Italy is so very romantic, but at the same time, the birthplace of the mafia... wealthy and sophisticated criminal minds. (That's my opinion anyway). I LOVE it!

You have created much potential in just two chapters.

Great job, Meg. I'm obviously curious for more when you get the chance, of course.

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Poor Harry. Sent by Kingsley to do the dirty work and convince Hermione that though this will be hard that she can and should do it. I love Harry.

There will be much more to come on the Venators. I'm trying to make them their own group without being too much like the DeathEaters. That is going to be tricky. The Venators loosely translates in The Hunters. The hunters of what?? Muggleborns of course. Evil creatures they are. Hehe jk.

I love Italy and I think it is the prefect place they would flee to. It is the birthplace of the Mafia but it is a sophisticated place with history and romance. Perfect setting.

I hope all your questions will be reveal in time. Thank you again for reading and leaving an awesome review.

Meg


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