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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello hello hello!

A very happy birthday to you!! I am here with your birthday present review :)

Okay, so I'll say that I'm generally all Lily/James and anything contradicting these two usually makes me sad. However there was something so unusual about this that I ended up quite enjoying it. It was also nice to see how the James/Sirius friendship was coping with the new James/Lily relationship.

I thought you delved into James conciousness really well. There was a great flow throughout and I did have to laugh at some of the thoughts that went through his mind. It was so realistic, a thought popping in your head without you wanting to think it and you trying to banish it away. I love his mental list of things he would never say to Sirius' face, because he was trying to be manly.

James is just one big contradiction in this isn't he? He swings round and round with his thoughts and his views. I was a little bit confused as to whether Sirius and Lily were together or if James is just imagining or worrying that they were/are and I definitey wasn't sure if James/Sirius had a thing in this? You seemed to imply it when James wanted to feel his Quidditch hands rather than Lily's soft ones so I wasn't sure. It is kind of the beauty of this piece though, you've left so much for us as the reader to fill in.

A couple of other things that made me smile: when James had an immature moment with the boobs and when James admits how much he's missing Sirius.

I did enjoy this little one-shot. You're a very talented writer! You say so much with so few words.

Happy Birthday once again!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey hey hey!

I know this is the tiniest bit late, but thank you anyway. :)

I'm generally mostly L/J myself - although Luna/Harry have recently overtaken them as my het!OTP - but this is basically a crack!fic, so I'm glad you gave it a chance.

James is great fun to write, because he's just so little angst. It's lovely, actually. The most he has to worry about at this point is just school stuff and persistent intrusive thoughts of the gay kind.

You know what, James has no clue either. Boy can't keep track of the relationships he's been in, honestly. So this fic may have a Lily/Sirius and a James/Sirius and a Remus/Sirius and maybe even a Lily/Snape or, the greatest ship of all, Peter/Frank; just depends on how much you feel like shipping today. XD

Thank you so much for your lovely review! :D


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