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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hi there! I'm here for your first review! :D

Firstly, OH MY GOD. THIS IS ACTUALLY PERFECT.

I don't know why I've never read it before! It's actually one of the best one-shots I've read on here so far!

I love, love, LOVE the comparisons with Peter and James, Wendy and Lily. I adore how you've written the way they were flying and the way Lily has become a part of the Marauders; I love seeing that in fics. It's never a good story when Lily causes a rift between them.

And the way she taught them about the Muggle fairy tales, it really captures Lily's personality perfectly.

And the simile: The cool night air creeps into the dormitory and into her bones like a whisper among friends

Wowza. That was absolutely gorgeous. I read it over and over, just WONDERING how someone could think of something like that.

And the 500 words, it was perfect. I think if you had written it longer, it would have dragged on. You've done really well with this one-shot. I can't find one fault!

And your James, he just seems so sweet and goofy; which is my favourite portrayal of him! :D

Also, about her feeling the laughter that's coming from him - that was another beautiful sentence.

These emotions (shipping feels), are just - oh my God. You've captured the right amount of fluffiness and romance without it being sickening. It's just perfect.

So, you can probably tell, I just LOVE this one-shot! I love everything about it! :D

Definitely a 10/10! :D

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