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Review:peanuts11 says:
My deepest and most sincere apologies for the late reply. Life has been non-stop, which unfortunately meant that reviews were non-existent.

I just love everything about this one-shot. As a lover of Hufflepuff's, I knew I would find this intriguing.

My favourite part was at the end, when it says, "Justin knew he had made a terrible decision that had ruined his life, but he couldn’t pin-point which choice was the one that had." - Because it makes me feel like Justin's going over the events cyclically in his head, wondering when it all went wrong. And for me, that image is kind of hauntingly beautiful.

I think what I love most about this story is that it accurately depicts the reality of war. We all obviously know how hard it would have been for muggle-borns being persecuted during the war but this is one of the first stories I've read where it shows us how hard it was mentally and physically on the mind.

I also really, really love the description you use. You create vivid descriptions with colour and also use similes and it just makes for easy reading.

I also really like how the structure of the one-shot isn't told in a sequential way. I don't think I've ever read a one-shot like it.

Thanks for introducing me to such a brilliant read

peanuts11

Author's Response: This has just made my day! Just. Made. My. Day. Completely.

Thank you so much for such a nice review! I truly an speechless, and just sitting in my chair, flapping my hands in excitement! :D

And don't worry about the late reply! It was a lovely surprise :D

I'm glad you liked my descriptions, because those are usually my weak point, so its nice to know I am improving!

Really and truly, I cannot thank you enough for such a wonderful review! THANK YOU!

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