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Review:Margravine says:
dun dun dun!

So all the Tom foreshadowing came through.. And I like that you didn't muck around drawing out the Jen is cheating scenario, I assumed there was explanation even before it got all curse-y.

I am liking the mature Toby and tanith days, Gabriel taking on Daedalus' mantle again and am scared for Toby! Poor man is never going to regain his prewar reflexes :(

Author's Response: Yep, it was Tom all along! Poor Tom. The infidelity angle was a red herring but no, I didn't think it would stand as more than a minor misdirection; it was there more to shake up Gabe and Tanith than strictly to be a Twist. Just as most people are convinced of Jen's innocence, people are convinced of Jen's fidelity.

Glad more mature Tobias and Tanith are enjoyable and convincing; I think those kids have been through silly times enough to be due some growing up and to enjoy it! But no, Toby is never going to be the duellist or fighter he once was. He could cope in a war but he was once upon a time a wizard who going go toe-to-toe with Tanith (the best fighter of the lot of them); definitely he couldn't do so these days. He'll just have to use his talents in other ways!

Assuming he gets out of this alive. Thanks for reviewing. ;)

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