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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! (: I'm here again.

THEY KISSED. Oh my gosh. They kissed. I wanted to get off my chair and jump around so bad. Sigh. If only we didn't have visitors. Ugh. The two of them seems like a perfect couple, it almost is annoying to know the fact that their story ends in a completely different way than what it seems.

Venn is getting into some really deep trouble, isn't he? As much as I love the two of them kissing, I feel like that sort of act would just fuel Rowena's anger towards him -and his family.

Helena's childish side appeared in this chapter. It's so easy to see how quickly she is falling in love to Venn. And I think that is both a good and bad thing. :

And Rowena seems less nicer than what she was at the start of the story. And no doubt that Salazar has something to do with that. The last paragraph particularly reminded me of Morgana from the Arthurian legend. She's starting to scare me.

Anyway, amazing chapter as always. ♥ I really enjoyed their mini-picnic even though it was a bit short. I wonder what happens now! What will Rowena do? Hmm. Not something too bad, I hope.

~Izzy

Thanks for making them kiss, by the way. ♥

43rd review out of 100

Author's Response: Hi Izzy! I'm pleased to see another of your reviews :D

It's funny, because I originally wanted the pace of the romance in this story to be insanely slow--as in, like, Helena kissing Venn on the cheek is a huge, huge deal. But then I just sort of fell head over heels for them, and I didn't want to deny them the happiness that comes with really kissing someone you love. Thus, they kissed :) It's so great that you felt like things had built up enough that you were really happy when that moment finally came.

Oh, yes, they're both getting into some trouble. They are falling for each other fast, and it's not something that makes everyone around them happy, necessarily. Rowena has really changed quite a bit over the course of the story, and you're right, her feelings toward Salazar have a lot to do with that. Neither of them is about to let up on our young lovers.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and more than that, I'm happy to see you return again and again and catch up, even though it makes me feel pressured to try to write and post faster! Haha. Thanks, seriously, for taking the time to leave me so many lovely reviews.

-Amanda


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