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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey! I figured I'd review this story this time because chapter two of Lungs isn't here yet. Plus, I love the title. ♥

Okay, so I haven't read a lot of stories about Dean, Seamus that is set Post-Hogwarts. I usually kind of avoid them since I always end up reading angst-filled and traumatic stories about the war. Don't get me wrong, I love those kind of stories, but sometimes I let myself get so lost in them that I just feel so sad and depressed afterwards.

Upon seeing the banner, the title and reading the summary (did I see an Oliver, there?!) though, I figured your story was different. The atmosphere you set the first chapter in was welcoming and it's kind of weird because since when did a pub full of witches and wizards drinking and chanting songs become welcoming.

I am absolutely loving Edie's character. I liked how the readers more about her through her actions than her words for most parts of the chapter. Its so easy to tell how strong her friendship bonds with Dean and Seamus are. I almost feel like the three of them are family! :D

A really wonderful job for this chapter. I cannot wait for Edie and Oliver to meet because I am just so excited like that. I've already come up with a possible ship name: Ediver. It's read as Eh-dee-ver. Omg. I'm so lame, I should stop now.

I'll be back for more!


37th review out of 100

Author's Response: Bahahaha. That is really funny about witches/wizards singing and chanting not being welcoming. Macbeth anyone? ;D

I'm glad you liked this chapter! I sent a revised version into the queue the other day, so that you get to actually *meet* Justin and Lisa as well. I know I've mentioned this in past responses, but I wanted to focus on the positive changes that could happen post-war, rather than focusing on angst. (Even though, like you said, those are fun to read!)

Uhhh can I just say that I've been secretly hoping somebody would like Edie enough to come up with a 'ship name? Ediver is so cute! Although in my head it's Eee-da-ver.

I'm so glad to hear that you'll be back for more! Thank you for the review. I greatly appreciate it. :D

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