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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! I'm here again. I took my time, didn't I? D:

Anyway, poor Anne. I don't think that she's absolutely hopeless when it comes to Jude, but I do feel sorry for her. Jude already seems like he's taken capture of her heart and he doesn't even know it! And then, there's Charlie. *Sigh*. She reminds me a lot of this girl that doesn't like me for no reason too. Though, I don't get bullied by her, so I guess I kind of feel what Anne's going through. Kind of.

As much as I hate Charlie though, I must say that you are really writing her well so far. Her character sounds so evil and I feel like she doesn't belong with Hufflepuff. Labeling people? That sounds like something a Slytherin would do.

The chapter's flow seemed a little bit choppy to me, but that might just be me reading fanfics at 11:00 PM. Overall, lovely chapter and I enjoyed reading it. ♥

~Izzy

36th review out of 100

Author's Response: Firstly, thanks for the review! Good luck on that one hundred!

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