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Review:Coralee says:
Okay, so after reading through every chapter, I decided it was time for a review. I really do like what you have written, but I have a few negative points and I'm very sorry for that. The first, this first point, I found rather amusing when I read it, but then I remembered that there just wasn't a possibility for it to occur in the wizarding world. wizards and witches would know who Santa was, they celebrated Christmas, though they would have probably called him St Nick, not Santa Claus. Which brings me to my second point, much like my first. Wizards and Witches would know what pizza is, after all, there are Italian witches and wizards! :) They eat the same food that muggles eat, but of course they have their magical food too. Which brings me to my final point, I understand writing fan fiction can be very difficult, but there are some things you need to stay true to about characters that the original author made, and grammar, there were quite a few things that made me feel like I was reading a diary, not a story. BUT! Overall, I think you did a lovely job for such a long, interesting fan fiction.

Author's Response: I'm very aware of this, actually. It's been around five years since I wrote this and it was my first e v e r fanfiction (and the first long story I ever wrote in english) so it was bound to have a l o t of mistakes in it - especially grammar, since English is not my native language. Also, because it was my first fanfiction, I was trying things out and ended up writing the characters in a way that fit the story, and not how they were in canon - which, sadly, is a very common beginner's mistake. Reading it now makes me cringe and wish I had the time and patience to rewrite it and make it good, but I really don't. Sorry the story isn't all it could be, but it's not as bad as it could be for a first try at fanfiction, I think :) I really glad you still liked it enough to read it all, and to leave a review, thank you :)

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