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Review:Courtney Dark says:
OHMYGOODNESS THEY KISSED! Well, sort of anyway:)

This chapter was filled with so much awesomeness that I don't really know where to start! There were just so many perfect moments in this chapter-Brienne and George obviously, the banter between the twins, Lee Jordan and Paisley...gah! How do you write so well!?

Okay, I'll just take things one at a time, shall I?

The breakfast scene was great. I love the moments with the twins, Brienne and Angelina talking together, because I feel as though they have great chemistry as a group of friends, which you have slowly developed through the chapters. I especially loved this bit: '“Serge is a lovely owl,” Angelina disagreed, “I was feeding him yesterday in the dorm. He didn’t scratch me once.”

Brienne frowned. “Well, I repel animals, apparently.”

“Because you’re so disgusting.” George grinned, and got up. “I’m going to find Lee. See you later.” It was so perfect! (And I apologise for the huge quote, by the way!) And I am using way too many exclamation marks...

The George and Brienne scene was AMAZING. You honestly could not have written it any better! And the accidental kiss was so cute and sweet and awkward at the same time...it ticked all the right boxes. I always liked George, but you have seriously made me fall in love with him! I also liked the line: 'Brienne felt a tug in her chest, his concern reminding her how she could tell the difference between the Twins: George was a shade more contained, collected, and sensitive than his brother' because it really mirrored exactly what I think about the twins. I don't know why, but I always have seen Fred as the slightly more outgoing twin, so it was nice to read something similar to my thoughts.

There was a bit of tension on the Hogwarts Express now, wasn't there? Silly Lee! In this chapter he completely reminded me of the Lee at the Quidditch matches-the one who was always talking about Angelina and how she refused to go out with him. The line: '“I - Lee Jordan - apologise to you –Brienne ‘Bloody Gorgeous’ Christie – for being a bit too forthright with your blondeness, and frankly, a bit of a prat. Do you forgive me, the dreadlocked one, for my insolence and inability to resist your Frenchness?” was absolutely perfect!

Anyway, this was truly an awesome chapter-I can't fault it!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! Yes, they kissed! (kind of).

I'm really glad you liked this chapter. It was kind of lighthearted with a lot of the Twins, because the next few chapters are going to be serious xD And I wanted there to be a development between Brienne and George before that happened.

I don't mind you using quotes! Nobody ever quoted me back to me before!

Yeah, silly Lee xD He's very flirty and ostentatious, and sometimes rude, but he fits in with them all the same.

Thank you again for the great review xD

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