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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi there!

I loved reading it! ♥. I'm normally a person who freaks out a bit when I find that the story doesn't have proper punctuation and all, but for some reason it didn't even bother me. I don't I think I noticed it until halfway through Tonks's part.

Speaking of Tonks (and Remus), I was taken a back a bit by how you portrayed their relationship, if you could even call it that. It's a sad thing, really. Though, you wrote both of their parts really well.

And OMG the last paragraph of their parts. Ouch. Is it just me or does those two paragraph feel like it describes their relationship here? Maybe it's just me, after all it is 2am now. O.o

I love reading your stories! It's always a different kind of thing every time. Though, I do hope that there will be a time when you write a happier story. I, for one, think that you'd do great at it. (:

~Izzy

31st review out of 100

Author's Response: Hi!

You've no idea how happy your comment about punctuation has made me. I was going for natural rather than proper punctuation for this fic, and though that sounds really pretentious, if you didn't notice the improperness it means I've succeeded. So, yay!

The relationship was... well, they weren't exactly a healthy couple in canon, I just took it to its logical conclusion. :D

One of these days, I'm going to write a romcom. With a happy ending. And it will be awful, but so much fun.

Thank you so much for your review! (And well done for making it to 100!)


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