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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
OM... *shut your ears* DOM'S A BOY!!! AND DOM/TEDDY! I'M SO EXCITED!

Yeah, I thought I was the only one who would write Dominique as a boy (gender neutral names are fun). I love him and his humor and his positive thinking, which he's starting now because the finding out he's gay part didn't sound so positive, like he said. He should definitely try to be positive about the fact that his own SISTER has made him the HELP. Low blow, even for revenge. Understandable, maybe, but I refuse to believe that Dom does not have good intentions. He's a good brother. :D

And Teddy. You can make him good, you can make him evil, you can make him as bad and as devious as he seems to already be in this - I still love him. Personally, I prefer him this way. He's usually too nice. I can't wait to see how things go between them.

I'm so excited to read more of this story. I really enjoyed this chapter.

Sam.

Author's Response: Thank you!! ^-^ I'm glad you like Dom's characterization! He's a darling :) I would absolutely adore having a little brother like him, someone who always unfailingly looks out for his sister. And Teddy... well, he's certainly going to be devious, but a good devious. After all, you have to remember that Dom just knows all the bad stuff about Teddy from stuff that Victoire told him. He hasn't heard Teddy's side of the story at all.
I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, so please keep your eyes peeled for the next one! :)
~ Missy


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