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Review:adluvshp says:
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Ah this seems like a fun story xD

I love your characters and they seem very interesting. I loved the part where Sirius and James talk about "eyeing" Mille. Millie and Lily's friendship looks cute.

The plot seems interesting and fun, and over all the pace, flow and grammar was okay. Since you're re-writing this, I am sure you can make the story better than it already is =)

Keep writing! Good work!

Cheers!
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(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I don't really mind about the plot (but thank you for liking it), but really, if the grammar was incorrect, my inner grammar Nazi rises and raises the entire area to the ground in rage over a misplaced comma!

And thank you!


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