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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! (:

I thought this was a really good insight on what Cedric's last thoughts could have been. I really love his character and how much pride he carried for his house. I also liked the fact that his thoughts weren't just composed of Hufflpuff but also of Cho and his Dad.

His thoughts were a bit of a jumble, to be honest, and once or twice I got lost when the scene changed, so maybe consider re-reading the story and try to make things more define. It's nothing major, though, so don't worry too much. :P

All in all, I thought you wrote Cedric's character really well. His desire to win the Triwizard Tournament showed through and I love he says in the last paragraph that even though it costed him his life, he doesn't regret going for the cup. He spoke like a true champion. ♥

I loved the story. Amazing job!

~Izzy

30th review out of 100

Author's Response: Hello!

Sorry for the delayed response to this! I wasn't expecting another review from you so this was a lovely surprise :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! I will have another read through and see if I can get rid of any confusion that might be caused. I did want it to be a tad confusing though - Cedric himself is confused to start with!

I think Cedric was really proud of being a hufflepuff which is why I wanted to have that in there. I wouldn't imagine him having any regrets either - he just doesn't seem the type to me.

Thank you so much for leaving another amazing review!

Lauren :)


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