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Review:Mystique says:
Hi, I'm finally here with your requested review and I apologize for the lateness of it. I was caught up in numerous real life problems. But anyway, on to the review.

I loved this chapter! Finally Oliver and Eddie properly meet, although they did meet before in the pub. I loved the twist, by the way. The only thing that I found a bit odd, was surely Eddie might sort of know what Oliver looked like as he is a famous Quidditch player and she is a pretty big fan of Quidditch.

I love Seamus' obsession with Oliver Wood. It's just brilliant!! Especially with Seamus following Oliver Wood into the showers. I laughed so hard when I read that. To be honest he reminded a bit of a hyper puppy when he was talking to Oliver. Or of a little fan girl.

I really like the relationship between Eddie and Dean. It seems really realistic, especially with that little moment between them in her flat. I have to admit, when Dean gave her his artist's quill I was rather worried that Eddie would lose it or ruin it somehow. But thankfully that hasn't happened so far.

I loved this chapter and was a little bit disappointed that the interview wasn't in this chapter but I shall definitely be reading onward.

Charlie :)

Author's Response: No problem! IRL problems do come sneaking up quite often, don't they? :3

I know that Edie not recognizing Oliver is a bit of a plot hole--I was thinking last night of downsizing how much she enjoys Quidditch just for that reason... Not sure if I want to do that, though. There were a LOT of loose ends I had to tie to cover up plot holes in this story, that being the one that wasn't explained away so easily xD

I honestly hadn't thought about the potential of Edie losing Dean's quill! That would add some drama indeed, although she would really only be screwing herself over because she bought it in the first place and would most likely have to buy the replacement... hehe.

I actually went back and edited this chapter to include a bit more of the article, but I want to keep it vague for ~*~plot twist reasons~*~. But don't worry, you'll be reading an article soon enough :D

Thank you so much! I appreciate the review!

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