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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
What an interesting story. I've never considered that side of Victoire before, but then again I've never really read any fan fiction where she isn't older and with Teddy so she wouldn't be wondering those kinds of things.

It's a nice idea and totally realistic, I sort of imagine her around about 16/17 maybe a little older here and I can picture the whole thing in my head. You've described it beautifully and I love the idea of her just sitting on the beach, just mulling over her thoughts. It's such a simple idea yet you've added depth to it and her thoughts are really thought provoking.

Then the ending. Teddy walks in and everything is just, better. It's so sweet and if you did get the inspiration I'd love to read some more like this! A great job, it's a really awesome one-shot! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing this! I'm also sorry for the delay in responding! Yup, you've got her age perfectly, this is the stage where they're just testing the waters between each other, where she's wondering who she is and that is a dangerous place for a witch to be. Especially a witch who's had a turbulent upbringing. I got the idea of having her so imperfect, darker than most other writings (or what i presume most people write because i've honestly read so few of her) was the idea that next gen children where damaged. At least, some of them and i imagine that the older ones (like Victoire, Teddy, maybe Molly and Dominique) who grew up with their parents who were still fighting their own demons then those demons could be transferred to their children.

Anyway, with that in mind i wanted to explore how it would be for her who had the weight of her name crushing down on her because she feels like she has to be her name. She has to show everyone that she is a symbol but for a teenager that is a bit bunch to handle as we saw with Harry Potter and him growing up.

Thank you so much for your review!!

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