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Hey it's patronus_charm here with your review, I don't know why. but like last time it somehow logs me out when I go to your stories:/ so yeah that's why it doesn't link back to my page. On with the review!

I loved this story it was just amazing, and so emotional, it made me tear up at moments, which is definitely good, considering what challenge it's for. I think the quote which you chose for the summary perfectly summarises what the story was about.

The flashback at the beginning truly showed how deep Molly and Arthur's relationship went, and though they are often portrayed as arguing in the books, this showed how much they really cared for one another.

I thought it was great that you set in the next generation era, as I've never really read any, which focuses on Arthur and Molly at this time, so it was nice to get their perspective on how time has passed, and how they've aged so greatly. You stayed really true to their characters as well, which was great as then you could really identify them to the ones we're so familiar with.

I liked the bit when you mentioned Hermione, Ginny and Fleur being pregnant all at the same time. It seemed a bit comedic to me, and added a light touch to an otherwise sorrowful story. It was nice to see how time had passed, by her imagining her grandaughters sitting there. It shows how this story will still be carried, just by different people.

It was really sad to see how, Molly is still so deeply affected by Fred's death, but I guess no one ever expected it to happen, so that's why everyone was so affected by it, especially Molly, as I think a mother's love for her child is the last thing ever to fade.

I'm so glad that you requested for a review, as this story was beautiful and it really did bring tears to my eyes. Best of luck for the challenge, I'm sure you'll do well in it :) Kiana x

Author's Response: Hi Kiana, thanks for coming by again :)

I'm glad you liked the quote I chose; it came to me pretty suddenly and I just couldn't shake it. I'm also pleased to hear that you liked how I portrayed Molly and Arthur's relationship as being truly loving underneath all the squabbling we see them do in canon.

Molly and Arthur really do seem like timeless characters for me; it's like you always expect them to be there. But I like how you mentioned that the children and grandchildren will carry the Weasley story along even after Arthur and Molly have passed away. I'm sure it would comfort Molly a lot to hear that :)

I figure that Fred's death would have always been so hard for Molly. She always picked on him and George for being idle when they were younger, and I'm sure she has a lot of regrets concerning him, and a lot of pain still inside.

Thanks very much for this fantastic review!

-Amanda

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