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Review:Jess the Enthusiast says:
Hi Adele! I'm so glad that you updated! I've been having similar problems with slow updates so I know how you're feeling - so take your time, we understand :D

And I loved this chapter! I guess we're finally seeing the cracks in Henry's perfection. Not that I want Keira to be unhappy and faced with a bad break-up, but I'm really excited for when she ends her relationship with him and starts dating Sirius (BECAUSE HE'S SO ALLURING AND MYSTERIOUS OH MY GOD I LOVE HIM). Which brings me to Sirius' birthday party; I can only imagine all of the beautiful moments they'll have together. And I know he'll eventually agree to play Chaser - he couldn't do something like that to James. And I also feel really bad about Rebecca's dad; that's so sad :/

So okay, I know this review has been all over the place, but great job! I'm excited for the next update! :D

10/10

~Jess :D

Author's Response: Oh my God, Jess! Ah, how I've missed you. Yeah, life is such a pain at the moment, and I've just had no time or will to write. :/

Haha, I love Henry, I do, but things just don't work out the way he'd like them, too. The problem with Ravenclaws, is that they don't understand why other people can't see their logic, or why they don't play the smartest move every turn. Gryffindors are willing to pass up on Check if it means it they can get Checkmate later. Ravenclaws just want to finish the game.

That doesn't make any sense, though, does it? :/

The next chapter is with my Beta and should be up soon (Huzzah!) so I'm not saying anything because spoilers. :P

Ahh, I need to read Wobderland. I've been gone for far too long and have misses updates (however slow. You were always a better updater than me).

Thank you, Jess! ^_^

- Adele :)

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