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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oh my goodness this was such an awesome chapter! And for the record, I am most certainly not getting sick of you!

I honestly think that this was my favourite chapter so far-but that is probably because I'm a sucker for humour and I found this chapter very funny. I especially liked the way you went back and forth between Brienne and Angelina and Fred and George's point of views.

I absolutely adored the way you described the coming of Christmas at Hogwarts. The line: 'Christmas was approaching, and the overnight embellishment of the castle into one smelling of pine and roasted chestnuts altered the castle and everybody in it hugely' was absolutely perfect-I felt myself longing for the smells of Christmas and imagining what it would be like to attend Hogwarts in December!

I think it's great that Brienne is slowly becoming more trusting of those around her and that her life just keeps getting better. It seems like her telling Angelina, Lee and Paisley is the first step in her regaining control of her life.

I think you wrote every single bit of the Hogsmeade trip absolutely perfectly. Your characterizations of Fred, George, Angeline and Brienne were awesome and I loved the dashes of humour you added in here and there-they made for a very enjoyable read. It was very cute how the twins accidentally mentioned their mum, and then looked back at Brienne, worried that they might have upset her. I think this really showed the growing strength of their bond, and I can't wait to see how this friendship continues to grow, I really can't! And the mention of the twins wearing matching knitted blue jumpers really took me back to the books.

As I said before, I really like how you jumped between the twins and the girls-by doing this, some authors would have interrupted the flow and made the chapter disjointed and awkward to read but you wrote this chapter so well that this certainly didn't happen. I also thought it was very funny how both parties were stressing and worrying about what they wanted to get each other-and how Fred and George especially really had no idea what Angelina and Brienne would like. I especially liked the line: 'Brienne doesn’t like clothes.”
“She doesn’t walk around naked, does she?”

“I dunno.” George looked bemused. “She might do. In the dormitory.” That really put a big smile on my face!

Brienne and Angelina's conversation about Brienne's possible feelings for George was adorable and perfectly written! Angelina is a great character-I love how you have kept what we know of her personality from the books but added your own twist on her. She is clearly a great friend, which is exactly what Brienne needs and some of the things she says, such as the line: '“I knew it. I knew you fancied him" are great in a classically simple sort of way.

This was, once again, another great chapter and I am still super interested in what the tarot cards bring to the story. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, it surprises me every time how you are so shiningly positive xD I always expect there to be a chapter you don't like so much, but you always love them! Wow! Thank you so much xD

The friendships between them all is very important, certainly more important than any kind of romantic relationships that may develop. The friendship between Brienne and Angelina will go through the biggest journey.

Again, thank you kindly for the lovely review :)

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