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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
I don't know what to say! There was just something about this one-shot that was so beautifully written and moving.

I love your characterisation of Fleur and I will admit I didn't know who it was until she spoke and then she had the French accent but when I read back over it I could see subtle little hints such as the scars on her husband and the description of her being a blonde princess. I love how you pick up on the fact that she isn't some dumb blonde with no emotions, but she actually has a brain she can use and a heart too. The love she feels for, not just Bill, but the entire Weasley family is so obvious it's heartbreaking.

I love the big sister aspect and how, even though she wants to be comforted, she know Ginny is hurting just as much, if not more then her so she goes to comfort her and the bond they have is lovely. I love it how Ginny is the only one who knows that Fleur has her wand and trust her enough to listen to her and not tell the rest of the family.

Poor Bill, I'm a sucker for stories with things like this is and I can't imagine what he was going through. His wife is sacrificing herself for someone they don't even know and although he doesn't know it, she's doing it because that's the person that attacked him. You make it so moving and then you moved on to Molly/Ginny and I was almost in tears. I can't imagine what she must have been going through, first Fred dies then Fleur is sacrificing herself and then suddenly Ginny is. I just want to give her a hug!

The second last line about the tears not escaping till you were in his arms was just so fitting and then the last line was so final and relieving, it was wonderfully worded! You've did a great job with this! :)

Author's Response: Hi darling ♥ I'm so sorry about the time it took me to respond to this. I was enjoying getting to read it over and over with the intention of responding, but then always chickening out. There's no way that whatever I saw is going to appropriately convey how much I appreciate not only you reviewing this, but leaving such an awesome review ♥

Let me give it a shot, though!

Fleur is one of my favorite, favorite characters to get inside their head. I don't write her often, but I *love* it when I do. She has so many contradicting traits, and I get so annoyed at the part fan fiction usually gives her. Like you said, she's not just a dumb blonde. She marries this man after he's attacked, her wedding is destroyed and she knows that, for as long as she's a Weasley and the war is going on, she's in danger. But she stick by him and does whatever she can to help, and I think that speaks volumes about her character.

Thank you again so much for your amazingly kind words. This review was such a treat, and I can't tell you how much it has made me smile! ♥

Jami


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