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Review:classicblack says:
Aah! I loved it!

But honestly can we just skip all the unnecessary drama and get right to the part where Amelie and James end up together? Because we all know it's bound to happen. Right? Right?!

I can't wait to see how you're going to incorporate James possibily losing his job (and something tells me he will lose his job which will nicely break up him and Henrietta and also create some sort of deep, drama, reconcilliation/ connection with Amelie that will make them end up together) into James and Amelie's relationship. I think both James and Amelie (mostly Amelie) need to grow up and realize/ accept that they're not totally happy with their relationships. That would be so much simpler.

But that ending! "Then it wasn't important"- it made me laugh and it made me want to slap both of them and yell for them to just get to the nearest bedroom. Honestly.

Fantastic chapter! Hope the next update comes quickly!
Happy writing,

Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah. Right. That's going to happen!

Basically, I'm not sure if you're reading the updated version or not, but I went back and edited Henrietta and James' characters: their behaviour and motivations, and so forth. Basically Henrietta, now, doesn't do anything wrong, but James dislikes her because they are interested in different things, and he keeps comparing her to Amelie. James is now a git, who obsesses and idolizes Amelie so much that it gets a bit much.

Yes! It would be simpler!

Haha! They should get their act together - be together, or not, or whatever.

Thanks for reviewing!

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