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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey, I'm here with your review! And I was glad to get the reviews up to 100 ;D

I really love Edie's friedship with Seamus and Dean it's so lovely and genuine and they all seem to balance each other out! I especially loved their reaction to finding out she got the interview with Oliver Wood. Just reading the scene at the beginning made me laugh all the way through, especially when Dean said tell him sister!

I really loved the way Seamus idolised Wood, the way he followed him around Hogwarts. It reminded me of Hermione and Lockhart, and Ginny and Harry! The way he turned up, and Wood's cofused reaction was great!

I loved how Edie is such a scatter brain, the way she didn't have a quill, a whole in her dress, and apparates into the rain, it reminds me so much of myself and how underprepared I tend to be, so it was really funny to read :')

I think my reaction to Wood being fake Krum was the same as Edie's. I kind of guessed when 'Krum' walked in, as it was quite a coincidence. Ha, seeing Wood's reaction, when Edie explained what he did made me laugh! He seems to have quite a few alcohol issues, by smelling of liquor cabinet, still drunk and downing the beer, is this becoming a sub-plot, the secret alcoholic?

One thing that did seem a bit strange to me was, the fact that Krum would have been a Triwizard champion when Edie was there so wouldn't she have known who he was. And considering how big a quidditch fan she was, it was a bit surprising she didn't 2 of its most famous faces.

Though I was looking forward to the proper interview, I'm glad that you didn't include it in this chapter, as there's already so much drama you don't need anymore.

Overall I thought it was a great chapter, and you suceeded in making me laugh all the way through :D Feel free to re-request anytime, as this story is great! Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for the review, I am still so excited that this story has reached 100!

That's a really funny (and true!) point about Seamus idolizing Wood the way that little girls Hermione/Ginny idolized their crushes. I feel like I need to incorporate that into the story now!

Also, I hadn't quite thought about how Edie would recognize Krum from the Triwizard tournament. I guess the fact that he and Oliver are both described in canon as "burly," combined with her seeing red and being angry for what he did (and of course her general absentmindedness) caused her to overlook that xD As for the issue with her being a huge Quidditch fan and not recognizing him, I suppose it's a plot hole... I just kind of counted on it being a slip-up for her not to recognize him as Oliver Wood, and then when she was told that he was actually Krum, she assumed that's why he looked familiar in the first place. But I will definitely need to reiterate that in the story, I think! Thanks for pointing that out.

And again, I really appreciate the review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D


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