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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
I've never read a pregnancy story where Al, or any character is already married, they're usually teenagers, which is why I don't really read pregnancy stories. So, this is already is different for me, I love that.

Great start, I liked getting to know how Ruby usually is around Al a little. The only thing I want to say is the thoughts, because it was all... the same? Well, I was kinda confused and wasn't sure why it had suudenly gone from third to first person and back. Maybe if they were in italics or something. But it was only a small thing and I understood after a moment. :)

Enjoyed reading this.

Sam.

Author's Response: haha thank you! ya tht tends to happen so I tried to do something new ;P

im glad you liked it though =)

thank you! ur review means alot =)


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