Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! :)

Gosh, there should be a warning in the summary that readers might need a couple or more tissues at hand when reading. I'm a person that gets teary-eyed easily and I was sobbing by the time I got to the end. My brother saw me and he told me "Get a grip! It's just fanfiction!" Obviously, he doesn't understand.

I felt really bad for Frank (Jr.) when Neville started explaining to him that grandpa isn't coming back and at the start I really didn't think that he was going to get the message, but then in the end he did. I wished he didn't because it feels like his innocence has now been torn away from him. :'(

Frank's character is by far one of the best ones I've seen children-wise around here. You wrote his characteristics really well and I thought it fit perfectly for his age. :D

And Neville, gosh, he is just so strong. I could just feel him trying to get through the death of his dad without showing too much weakness. Hannah and him make such a perfect couple. That last paragraph was really sweet and it just shows that whenever there are tough times, the people that you can rely most on is your family. ♥

I live in Australia, though I am not Aussie, but I have to point out the 'mate' thing. And no, not in a bad way. I just like to say that every time I read that word through-out the story, I couldn't help but smile a little. I don't know why, maybe because there's a sense of familiarity there despite the sadness going on. I know that 'mate' isn't only used by Australians, but also the English. So yeah, I should stop rambling now.

Anyway, I really loved your story! I did see a few grammar mistakes but ones that could easily be fixed. :)

~Izzy

29th review out of 100

Author's Response: Oh no, I'm sorry this made you cry! Yeah, my brother doesn't understand fan fiction either! He'd probably say the same thing :P

Yeah I know :( Poor Frank had to go through that at such a young age! You're right, some of his innocence had been taken from him, I think, but I think it also made him grow up and see things differently, too.

Aw, thank you! That means a lot! I'm really glad you liked the way I wrote him, especially because I was really nervous about how the readers would like him :)

Yay, you liked the ending! :D I really wanted this to have a good ending because of all the angst going on. Nobody deserves to be sad all the time and I'm just happy that they all have each other to lean on :)

Haha, well thank you! I had somebody review earlier about 'mate' not being a British term so hearing that it is from someone who actually knows makes me happy :) I'm glad you liked it though ;D

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing and I really hope you got to 100!

-Amanda


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 343
Submit Report: