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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey there! I'm here from the Snakes Review Tag.

Out of all your stories this one shot caught my eye almost immediately. There is always something special, something deep and meaningful about a mother's tale and her desire to protect her children. And this was Narcissa! I couldn't let the opportunity pass without reading a story where she defies everything for the love of her new born Draco.

I liked the fast pace of the story. The rhythm of the action, the fast movement of her actions and the quick course of her thoughts served as proof to her love for Draco and her urgency to reach his hideout and check he is safe. It created the much needed "feel" for a story of this sort that in turn allowed us to sympathize more with Narcissa.

Seeing we already had a testimony of Narcissa's love for her family in the books, it's not hard to imagine that it wasn't the first time she was willing to sacrifice the war she fought in, her master for the safety of her son. So on that account she felt perfectly in character. Very good portrayal of her motherly love. You offered us another chance to see that side of her that we didn't see in the books, except in Deathly Hallows. Not to mention that you managed to insert the prompts with ease until the point that they were part of the story. Had only one of them been removed the story would not be the same. Well done!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad that this caught your eye, I always believe in a Mother's love strongly too, so its good to know that you were interesting in reading this Mother's tale.

This was my first time writing action of sorts, so I am glad you liked it, and found the rhythm, movement, and course in align with the story feel.

I am glad you found her Narcissa in character, and didnt found the prompts to be forced in the story but rather as vital to the plot.

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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